Shadows

Posted by: Prudein Poetry
14
Nov

Shadows in the moonlight

silver turns to gray

raindrops mingle with tears

streaking down cheeks astray

blackness smears

the cold is here to stay

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4 comments so far

1.  Rosietinted
November 16th, 2009 at 10:25 AM

this is so simple and sweet, I love it!

2.  D
November 17th, 2009 at 12:32 PM

Delhi is so wet. I absolutely detest winters. So much so that i would love to hibernate if there is such a policy….continue with your story…want to read you grow up

3.  Rashi
November 19th, 2009 at 3:55 PM

I luv the expression of mingling and staying there…

4.  Ben Ditty
November 25th, 2009 at 11:38 PM

I like the perception of silver turning to gray. I used to think they were so similar when I was young, now they seem a world apart.

 

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